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2013-10-25-Trust but Research

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Thanks go to Pory for the improved dialogue.  Much better than what I had to spit out on the spur of the moment, and I can lead this conversation into the next page, and scene.
Thanks also go to JXT for the keyboard model (sketchup.google.com/3dwarehous… ) I used for this page, because it was better than any keyboard I could ever draw, either by hand or on a draw program.
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I think I'll start to leave comments on dA from now on.  I'm not going to give any serious critique on the art.  That's Herb and Pory's department.

For me, the word "Break-In" reminds me of the (in)famous first line of Rangers of NIMH.  Once you get past the grammar issues and lack of proofreading of that story, I found it to actually be pretty funny.  There has been times where I considered doing a crack fic like that where there are random shout outs and references to whatever comes to mind for the sake of comedy. I also contemplated making a spiritual successor fanfic called "The Throwback of Johnny Briz" at times.