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2014-09-08-The Caffeine Crash

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It appears that Jennifer has gone through all five stages of Coffee Use:  theoatmeal.com/comics/caffeine

Thanks for Pory for the edits.
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Okay, I know we're all busy people, but here's some quick-fixes.

Panel 4, Amber: Break the sentence into two, end the first with a question mark.
Panel 5, Amber: Last line needs punctuation.