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Scarlet PI--Strip 1 by davidfoxfire Scarlet PI--Strip 1 by davidfoxfire
Is it me or does this make for a better start and character development, especially for Jim?
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sapphirefox1988 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005   Digital Artist
hello! decided i'd read PI from #1!

wow, your skill really improved.
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DreadedOne131 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
So did I.  Look forward to reading it all the way through!
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davidfoxfire Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2005
Why thank you. I was hoping that I would indeed show an improvement, at least from my fanfict years if now from the previous attempt at Scarlet's story.
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Daybreakcat Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2004
In the first panel, you drew the angle on the countertop a little severe, as well as the other objects around it. It looks at though he is leaning backwards a little bit.
Spelling corrections:precinct, and guarantee
Question: What do you mean "does this make for a better start and character development than Jim?" Did you mean FOR Jim?
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davidfoxfire Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2004
'Precinct', 'guarantee', and 'for.' : Thank for letting me know. I'll make the correction.


As for the severe angle, it must be something to do with the perspective. I was trying to give the point of view that are close up and looking at Jim. Sometimes it works, sometimes not. I'll be keeping an eye on this.
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TalentlessFox Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Snowflake studios was hacked. Or so thats what I saw.
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davidfoxfire Featured By Owner May 22, 2010
Almost expected if some say.

At least we still have DA for now.
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TalentlessFox Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like how quickly you reply. I see that you're starting to turn away from comics in favor of books and the like, I wish you the best of luck. I will miss seeing your comics as I'm a visual type of person. :cry: Johnny B. sure is charming as a character.
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davidfoxfire Featured By Owner May 22, 2010
I often get on here often to catch up on the deviants I'm watching. Thanks for the good words and I hope you become a reader of my novels. Oh, and Johnny B? I had a script done for him during April and I'll be working it into a book later on this year.
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AzabacheSilver Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Alot of closed accounts on this thread, I hope I am not next XD
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